Rate my first yu gi oh deck?

not a bad deck, i give it a 9. try adding the staple monster, spells & traps, these are 3x Cyber Dragon, Magician of Faith, Sangan, Breaker the Magical Warrior, Spirit Reaper, D.D. Warrior Lady, Graceful Charity, Mystical Space Typhoon, Heavy Storm, Confiion, Nobleman of Crossout, Premature Burial, Mirror Force, Torrential Tribute & Ring of Destruction. (I run all of these in my Cyberdark Deck (Mechanized Apocalypse) Except 4 warrior lady and they really help). Hope this helps!